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A lesson from my sister

My elder sister was different. She was socially awkward. She could not look at people in the eye. She would mumble (嘟哝) to herself and repeat the words she had just said. The child psychologist had termed it as “Asperger Syndrome”.

She, however, was academically capable. Therefore, we attended the same primary school. Despite this, I never, ever admitted in public that she was my sister. There was one incident, however, that changed how I viewed my sister. It was the incident that changed me.

Being in primary six, about to graduate, the school had made it a must for everyone to perform. Due to my sister’s inability to work together with others, she had to do it individually.

“I’ll sing,” my sister told my parents confidently. Hearing that, I was completely shocked. How could my sister, who was socially awkward, sing in front of the school? I knew so well that if this happened, she would surely embarrass me.

Silently I prayed I would not have to watch my sister disgrace herself. It is fine. No one knows she is your sister. I remember telling myself these exact lines as I sat in the hall, waiting for the performances to start.

The lights dimmed and the curtains parted to reveal the only solo—my sister. It took about a whole minute for her to speak out her name and class and by that time, whispers were heard in the audience. “Why is she taking so long?” People around me asked. I sat nervously in my seat, wishing I were somewhere else.

注意:

1. 所续写短文的总词数应为120左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Finally my sister started to sing.

 

 

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Guilt (内疚) and shame filled my heart as I listened to my sister’s wonderful singing.

 

 

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Finally my sister started to sing. I was prepared for the worst. She opened her mouth, and I was shocked—she sang effortlessly and melodiously. Her voice rang naturally through the hall, beautiful in its power. I listened ever so carefully to the lyrics that she had composed all by herself and wondered—how did I not know that my sister could sing like an angel?

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Guilt (内疚) and shame filled my heart as I listened to my sister’s wonderful singing. I realized that I had been so wrong. She was socially awkward yet so gifted. How could I have doubted my sister’s abilities? She taught me a lesson that I should not judge a person from just one perspective. Although she knew that I was embarrassed by her and was unwilling to attend her concert, she had never taken it to heart. It was then that I was determined to love her unconditionally and tell everybody that she was my sister.

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本文以人物为线索展开,这篇文章主要讲述了作者和姐姐之间的故事。姐姐有一种社交障碍,但在学术上很有能力。有一次在学校演出中,她独自唱歌,让作者震惊地发现她的歌声非常美妙。作者感到内疚和羞愧,意识到自己之前的误解。从那以后,作者决定无条件地爱她并公开承认她是自己的姐姐。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容 “最后我姐姐开始唱歌” 可知,第一段可描写作者的姐姐唱歌时出乎意料的优秀表现,以及作者自己的疑问。

②由第二段首句内容 “当我听着姐姐美妙的歌声时,内疚和羞愧充满了我的心。” 可知,第二段可描写作者自己内心的愧疚以及作者最终做出的改变。

2. 续写线索:

姐姐开始歌唱——作者感到惊叹——作者感到愧疚——明白道理——接受姐姐

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①知道:wonder / want to know

②意识到:realize / be aware of

③出席:attend / be present at

情绪类

①震惊:shocked / astonished

②尴尬的:awkward / embarrassed

(点晴)

(高分句型1) “Although she knew that I was embarrassed by her and was unwilling to attend her concert, she had never taken it to heart.” (运用了由although引导让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句。)

(高分句型2) “It was then that I was determined to love her unconditionally and tell everybody that she was my sister.” (运用了强调句结构和that引导的宾语从句。)

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