假如你是明启中学学生李华，最近学校学生会举办了一年一度的义卖活动。现向同学们征集改进建议，让明年的义卖活动更加成功。请你写一封信给学生会，内容须包括：

1. 简要描述本次活动及存在的问题；

2. 给出具体的改进建议及原因。

参考范文：

Dear Student Union,

I am writing to offer some suggestions for the annual charity sale held recently.

The charity sale this year was a great opportunity for us to contribute to a good cause. However, there were some issues. Firstly, the layout of the stalls was chaotic, making it difficult for customers to find what they wanted. Secondly, the promotion was insufficient. A lot of students didn’t know the details of the sale until it had already started.

To make next year’s event more successful, I suggest the following. For the layout, we could divide the stalls by categories in advance, such as books, handicrafts, and toys. This would make the shopping experience more convenient. Regarding promotion, we can use social media platforms like WeChat and Douyin to publicize the event in advance, including information about the time, place, and featured items. This will attract more students to come and support the charity sale.

I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Looking forward to a more wonderful charity sale next year.

Best regards,

Li Hua

这是一篇应用文。最近学校学生会举办了一年一度的义卖活动。现向同学们征集改进建议，让明年的义卖活动更加成功。请考生写一封信给学生会。

(详解)

1. 词汇积累：

机会：opportunity → chance

贡献：contribute to → make contributions to

混乱的：chaotic → messy

宣传：publicize → promote

2. 句式拓展：

合并简单句

原句：For the layout, we could divide the stalls by categories in advance, such as books, handicrafts, and toys. This would make the shopping experience more convenient.

拓展句：For the layout, we could divide the stalls by categories in advance, such as books, handicrafts, and toys, which would make the shopping experience more convenient.

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “Firstly, the layout of the stalls was chaotic, making it difficult for customers to find what they wanted.” (现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句。)

(高分句型2) “A lot of students didn’t know the details of the sale until it had already started.” (运用了not ... until ... 引导的时间状语从句。)