上周你校英文报纸Campus Life栏目发起了一项关于 “中学生的暑假计划” 的调查。请根据以下调查结果写一篇稿件投稿。

内容包括：

1. 情况介绍；

2. 你的计划和理由。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。

参考范文：

Last week the column Campus Life of the school English newspaper carried out a survey of how students spent the summer holidays. As is shown in the chart, the majority of students, as many as 85.6%, will travel with their parents while 86.7% will devote themselves to studying new knowledge. Students participating in volunteer activities account for 22.5%, followed by 23.5% who help with the housework.

The figures suggest there are various ways to spend the summer holidays. Actually, any way that allows us to explore a new world as well as enjoying ourselves is a good choice, so it is wise to choose what is most suitable for us. As far as I’m concerned, apart from studying, I will spare some time to relax and explore the wonderful world so that they can have well-rounded development.

本篇书面表达属于图表示作文。要求考生根据一项校英文报纸Campus Life栏目发起了一项关于 “中学生的暑假计划” 的调查写一篇稿件投稿。

(详解)

1. 词汇积累

展示：show → demonstrate

致力于：devote oneself to → commit oneself to

参加：participate in → be engaged in

实际上：actually → in fact

2. 句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Students participating in volunteer activities account for 22.5%, followed by 23.5% who help with the housework.

拓展句：Students participating in volunteer activities account for 22.5%, which is followed by 23.5% who help with the housework.

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “As is shown in the chart, the majority of students, as many as 85.6%, will travel with their parents while 86.7% will devote themselves to studying new knowledge.” (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句。)

(高分句型2) “Students participating in volunteer activities account for 22.5%, followed by 23.5% who help with the housework.” (运用了现在分词作定语，过去分词作状语，who引导定语从句。)