| 感受与感悟 题目答案及解析

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In high school, many students may encounter difficulties in their studies, and so did I. Sometimes, I would become very confused. Math problems that seemed to be impossible to solve, puzzling grammar in English, and difficult historical events all made me feel at a loss. I didn’t know where to start or how to improve.

Moreover, the fierce competition among classmates also added to my anxiety. Seeing others doing well, I couldn’t help but question myself, wondering if I was working hard enough. This sense of uncertainty made me doubt my abilities and future. I was losing patience and drive.

One sunny day, as I was sitting in the classroom feeling a bit bored, my teacher came in and announced that we would have a special project—to plant a tree in the schoolyard. I was excited at the thought of getting outside and doing something different.

I went outside and started digging the hole for the tree. I worked hard, feeling the dirt on my hands and the sweat on my forehead. As I was working, a classmate, Mary, came over and said, “Hey, you’re really putting a lot of effort into this!” I smiled and replied, “Yeah, I want this tree to grow strong. It feels like we’re doing something meaningful.” Mary nodded in agreement, “Definitely. And it’s amazing to think about how we’re all part of this process of growth.”

As the weeks passed, I would visit the tree often, observing the little tree as it faced many challenges, including harsh weather and strong winds. But each time, it overcame them and continued to grow taller and stronger, providing shade and shelter for us. Its journey in the wind and rain was a test of its perseverance (坚持) and growth. It made me wonder whether I could be like the tree, growing and changing.

注意:

1. 续写词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。

One day, as I stood by a tree lost in thought, my teacher approached me.

 

 

Reflecting on it now, I realize this conversation was a turning point in my life.

 

 

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One day, as I stood by the tree lost in thought, my teacher approached me. She asked, “What are you thinking about?” I explained my realization about the tree and how it mirrored my struggles. My teacher smiled warmly and said, “That’s exactly right. Just like the tree, you will face challenges, but you must keep growing. You need to persevere, adapt, and find strength within yourself. Remember, every difficulty you overcome makes you stronger.” Her words impressed me deeply, and I felt a renewed sense of determination. I decided then and there to approach my studies with the same persistence as the tree.

Reflecting on it now, I realize this conversation was a turning point in my life. Inspired by the tree’s growth and my teacher’s encouragement, I began to tackle my academic challenges. Slowly but surely, I noticed improvements in my grades. More importantly, I learned to consider challenges as opportunities for growth. This shift in mindset not only helped me academically but also taught me a lifelong lesson about the power of perseverance and the beauty of continuous learning. Whenever I face obstacles now, I remember the tree and the wisdom it taught me, reminding me that with patience and determination, I can overcome any adversity.

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本文以一棵树的成长过程为线索,映射了作者在高中阶段面对学习困难和自我怀疑的心路历程。然而,一次特别的植树项目成为转折点,激发了作者的兴趣与热情。作者见证了小树在逆境中展现出的坚韧与成长,这不禁让他反思,是否也能如树一般,在面对生活中的风雨时,学会坚持与改变。这个过程不仅让作者体验到了自然界的顽强生命力,更促使他对自身的潜力与成长轨迹有了新的认识。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容 “一天,当我站在树边沉思时,我的老师接近了我。” 可知,第一段可描写老师解开作者心中的疑惑。

②由第二段首句内容 “现在回想起来,我意识到这次交谈是我生命中转折点。” 可知,第二段可描这次谈话以后作者获得的感悟。

2. 续写线索:站在树旁沉思——老师走近并询问——解开心中疑惑——回想交谈内容——感悟

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①解决:tackle / handle / resolve

②克服:overcome / get over / conquer

③鼓舞:inspire / encourage

情绪类

①深深地打动了我:impress me deeply / touch me deeply

②被激励的:inspired / motivated / encouraged

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “Inspired by the tree’s growth and my teacher’s encouragement, I began to tackle my academic challenges.” (运用了过去分词inspired作状语。)

(高分句型2) “Whenever I face obstacles now, I remember the tree and the wisdom it taught me, reminding me that with patience and determination, I can overcome any adversity.” (运用了whenever引导时间状语从句,省略了引导词that / which的定语从句和现在分词reminding作结果状语以及that引导的宾语从句。)

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