高中 | 个人情感与人际关系 题目答案及解析

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Ali and his younger sister, Zahra, lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood. Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job, and they had only a little money to buy food. As they had not paid the rent for several months, the landlord was breathing down their necks (盯着他们).

One day, Ali took Zahra’s shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed, but he lost them on the way home. It wasn’t until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes. He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed, so he begged his sister to keep it secret. Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Ali’s running shoes. Zahra’s school hours were in the morning, so she would wear them first. After school, she would rush back and give them to Ali. He could then run to his school, which began in the afternoon. Although he ran as fast as he could, Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.

Ali heard about a long-distance race that was held for the boys in the city. When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes, he decided to take part. He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that he would win her the new shoes.

The day of race arrived. Ali had a strong start, but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache. Getting more and more exhausted, he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her. Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength, and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners, determined to finish third. Suddenly, as the finish line drew near, another runner collided (碰撞) with Ali from behind and he crashed to the ground.

Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead. Refusing to give up at this point, he jumped to his feet and ran as fast as he could. He dashed across the finish line and won the fourth prize. Thinking he would let his sister down, Ali couldn’t help sobbing. Just then he suddenly heard the announcement from the broadcast that the runner who collided with Ali was disqualified (被取消资格) for breaking the rule.

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He finally managed to win the third prize.

 

 

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参考范文:

He finally managed to win the third prize. Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister. Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly. On his arrival, Ali found Zahra was waiting outside. “Zahra, see what I have got for you.” Ali said excitedly, taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands. The instant Zahra saw the shoes, her face lit up. So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali. “Thank you! Ali.” Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly.

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本文以人物和鞋为线索展开,文章讲述Ali和他的妹妹Zahra和父母住在一个贫穷的社区,他们没有钱买东西。一天Ali给妹妹去修跑鞋,结果把鞋子弄丢了,怕父母生气,他和妹妹商量一起保守秘密,于是他们共用Ali的跑鞋。Ali得知城里举办长跑比赛,三等奖的奖品是一双新鞋,决定参加比赛,在比赛的时候,和一名选手相撞,最后跑了第四名,他伤心哭泣,就在那时他从广播中听到了与Ali相撞的运动员因违反规则而被取消比赛资格的消息。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

由本段首句内容 “他终于获得了三等奖。” 可知,本可描写Ali赢得了新鞋,开心地跑回家和妹妹分享喜悦的过程。

2. 续写线索:开心获奖——跑回家——把奖品送给妹妹——兄妹很激动——开心地拥抱在一起

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①赢得,获得:win / gain / obtain

②涌出:well up / pour out

③拥抱:hug / embrace / hold in one’s arms

情绪类

①欣喜若狂,非常开心:overjoyed / wild with joy / over the moon

②激动地:excitedly / with excitement

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(高分句型1) “Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony, Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.” (由连接词as引导的原因状语从句和现在分词作状语。)

(高分句型2) “So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali.” (运用了so ... that连接的结果状语从句倒装结构。)

(高分句型3) “Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly.” (as引导的时间状语从句和无灵主语表示情感。)

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