高中 | 个人情感与人际关系 题目答案及解析

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I’d always been told to take care of my older brother, Brian, who was born weak and small. I’d often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him. My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel (守护天使) for Brian. However, that was not the case.

One day our school sponsored a pumpkin-carving contest. First prize was$100, and I knew just how I would spend it. There was a brand-new game I was dying to own. So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket.

When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I’d picked out, it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I’d surely screw it up (搞砸). I thought of Brian’s smaller, delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job. I immediately begged Brian. Unexpectedly, he asked for a cut. That was fifty-fifty. Quickly doing the math in my head, I figured out even if I split (分摊) the first prize, I’d still have enough cash for the game. So I gave in to Brian’s demands. With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face, and now we had the best pumpkin ever.

Then the unexpected happened: We came in second. Unfortunately, second prize was only$50, and I needed every penny of that to buy the game. The day of the awards ceremony, the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home, sick with cold.

If he really wanted to win, he would have been here today, I thought to myself, justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian’s runny nose. With hardly a thought, I ran to the store and bought my dream game. That night when Brian asked if we had won, I denied, afraid to look into his eyes.

The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college. I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer.

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1. 续写词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph 1:

I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye.

 

 

Paragraph 2:

“You actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was shocked.

 

 

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Paragraph 1:

I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye. It was a picture of the pumpkin we had carved together. Underneath, Brian had written, “My first real win with my brother. Even if we didn’t get first, it was a victory because we worked as a team.” Seeing those words, a wave of guilt washed over me. I remembered how I had selfishly taken all the money and lied to him. I realized how much I had let him down. I turned to Brian, ready to confess everything.

Paragraph 2:

“You actually knew and didn’t say anything?” I was shocked. Brian just smiled gently and said, “I always knew. But I also knew that you needed that game more than the money at that time. And I was proud of our teamwork, not the prize. I hoped one day you’d understand the real meaning of winning together.” His words made me feel even more ashamed. I apologized sincerely, vowing to make it up to him. From then on, I truly understood my role as his guardian angel and the importance of true brotherhood.

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本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者与哥哥Brian之间的一次经历,展现了兄弟之间的情感变化以及作者对 “真正胜利” 的理解。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容 “我正欣赏着这些照片,其中一张吸引了我的目光。” 以及第二段首句内容 “‘你其实早就知道却什么都没说?’ 我震惊地问道。” 可知,第一段可描写作者发现自己的哥哥早就知道他们获得了二等奖,却没有揭穿作者。

②由第二段首句内容 “‘你其实早就知道却什么都没说?’ 我震惊地问道。” 可知,第二段可描写作者向哥哥道歉,也真正理解了兄弟情谊的重要性。

2. 续写线索:作者欣赏着照片,突然发现了一张俩人一起雕刻南瓜的照片——在照片下,哥哥记下了他们一起雕刻南瓜这件事,并感叹虽然没有获得第一名,但是仍然是胜利——作者突然意识到哥哥早就知道了真相,却没有揭穿自己的谎言——作者准备向哥哥坦白,可是哥哥却温柔地自己为两人的团队合作感到自豪——作者非常愧疚,真诚地向哥哥道歉——从此之后,作者真正理解了兄弟情谊。

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①说谎:lie / tell a lie

②使……失望:let down / disappoint

③道歉:apologize / make an apology

情绪类

①对……感到自豪:be proud of / take pride in

②真诚地:sincerely / genuinely

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “It was a picture of the pumpkin we had carved together.” (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。)

(高分句型2) “Even if we didn’t get first, it was a victory because we worked as a team.” (运用了even if引导的状语从句和because引导的状语从句。)

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