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假定你是李华,正在英国某中学做交换生,得知校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请你给队长Mark写封邮件申请加入,内容包括:
1. 自我介绍;
2. 申请加入的原因;
3. 期待回复。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mark,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student in our school. I’m writing to apply to be a member of our school ping-pong team. I have confidence that I am a wise choice for the team.
To begin with, I am enthusiastic about ping-pong and started playing it in primary school. In addition, I have played in several ping-pong matches and performed well. Last but not least, it is playing ping-pong that connects your country with mine closer, so I’d like to take this chance to make friends with more people who also enjoy playing ping-pong.
I really hope to join you. I would appreciate it if you could reply tome at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
"]]本文是一篇应用文。邮件类作文。
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,申请加入乒乓球队。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 点明写作目的
2. 介绍自己相关情况
1) 自我介绍
2) 申请加入的原因
3) 期待回复
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
第三步:连词成句
1. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student in our school.
4. I am enthusiastic about ping-pong and started playing it in primary school.
5. I have played in several ping-pong matches and performed well.
6. it is playing ping-pong that connects your country with mine closer
7. I would appreciate it if you could reply tome at your earliest convenience.
根据提示及关键词(组) 进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1. 表文章结构顺序:First of all Firstly / First, Secondly / Second ... And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2. 表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only ... but (also), including,
3. 表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n. / doing, On the one hand ..., On the other hand ... Some ..., while others ..., as for, so ... that ...
4. 表 因 果 关 系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
5. 表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6. 表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n. / doing
7. 表 陈 述 事 实:In fact, frankly speaking,
8. 表达自己观点:As far as I know / concerned, In my opinion, personally, as to me
9. 表总结:In short, In a word, In conclusion, In summary, all in all, briefly / in brief; generally speaking, as you know, as is known to all
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了定语从句,如:I’d like to take this chance to make friends with more people who also enjoy playing ping-pong.以及强调句,如it is playing ping-pong that connects your country with mine closer使用了一些固定词组,如To begin with,In addition,Last but not least,at your earliest convenience.等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
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