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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Sometimes things don’t go as planned, but that doesn’t mean they can’t still be wonderful in their own way. My parents and I had spent forever researching summer camps online. Finally, we picked out one where I could design games, animate (制作动画) characters, and learn other cool coding (编程) stuff.
My mom said, “I like the idea of you exercising that clever brain of yours. But I also want you to get plenty of fresh air.” “Campers can choose to hike or swim every afternoon!” I said, as I clicked on the registration form.
My dad filled out the form, and weeks later, my parents dropped me off for what I thought would be a week of nonstop computer-coding fun.
I arrived at the check-in table at the same time as a camper of my age named Halley, who was wearing an adorable sunhat. Halley greeted, “We are in the same group-number 7.” Led by an advisor, we followed the green arrows to the campsite.
I surprisedly found that it was so cool and woodsy along the path. I exchanged ideas with Halley about what might come out of the camp. Halley excitedly mentioned the little animals he loved to observe and something about night sky watching.
“You gave me the best idea,” I said. “I’ll base my characters on the animals you mentioned!” Halley laughed. “I might be missing something here. Who are these mysterious characters?”
“You know, the characters we’ll be designing and animating on computers this week!” I said. “Uh, sorry. Still lost,” said Halley. “Why would we be doing computer stuff at Nature Camp?”
It was then that I realised some errors must have been made. I must have accidentally clicked on the wrong online form! We immediately raced back to the welcome table to see if I could switch over to Tech Camp, but of course it was completely full.
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I forced a smile as we headed for our campsite.
“OK, I’ll have a try,” I looked at Halley thankfully.
I forced a smile as we headed for our campsite. As I stepped forward, I just felt so disappointed that I had to sit down. Seeing that, Halley sat next to me. For the next few minutes, regret immersed me as my treasured Tech Camp slipped away due to my inattention. Then Halley broke the silence, whispering kindly, “I guess it was the call of the wild.” I responded with a bitter smile. I was presented the stuff I could enjoy from nature, suggesting we hike and experience it. “You can discover unexpected excitement.” he encouraged me.
“OK,I’ll have a try,” I looked at Halley thankfully. We reached the campsite and started to explore the nature. Nature Camp turned out amazing! We turned over stones to be amazed by the creatures beneath and hiked through woods to be greeted by the mountains behind. My favorite time came when we slept out under the stars, talking about ancient Greek stories. Even though I didn’t choose the program on purpose, Halley was right. Try not to stay stuck in the negative for a whole bunch of amazingness really is just waiting to jump out and surprise you!
"]]本文是一篇读后续写。属于完全开放性质类作文。本文为记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者参加夏令营,选择了编程项目,但是和一起去夏令营的Halley交流之后,作者发现自己选错了夏令营。他想要改成技术营,却发现已经满员了。
(详解)
1. 段落续写
①根据第一段首句 “我们朝营地走去,我强颜欢笑。” 可知接下来的段落内容可以描述我对没有选择技术营感到遗憾,随后Halley走上前安慰我,他鼓励让我体验大自然并说会给我带来意想不到的兴奋。
②根据第二段首句 “‘好吧,我试试。’ 我感激地看着Hallay。” 可知,接下来的内容可以描述我们到了露营地,如何探索大自然以及自然夏令营带给我的享受。
2. 续写线索:走向营地——感到遗憾——Halley安慰我——给我鼓励——尝试自然营——享受快乐——我的感受
3. 词汇激活
行为类
走上前:step forward / go forwrd / come up
出现:immerse / appear / arise
珍惜:treasure / cherish / value
鼓励:encourage / hearten / embolden / pull for
情绪类
失望的,沮丧的:disappointed / chagrined / let sb. down / despondent
惊讶的:amazed / shocked / surprised
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “Seeing that, Halley sat next to me.” (运用了现在分词作状语。)
(高分句型2) “Even though I didn’t choose the program on purpose, Halley was right.” (运用了让步状语从句。)
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