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One sunny afternoon, I was playing in the backyard when I noticed a beautiful shiny piece of paper lying on the table. It was leftover aluminum foil (锡纸) from a package my mum had opened. I picked it up and was immediately attracted by its sparkling appearance. Curiosity got the best of me, and I couldn’t help but ask my dad about it.
“Dad, what is this paper called? It’s so shiny and beautiful!” I inquired, holding the aluminum foil up for him to see.
My dad chuckled and replied, “That’s. called aluminum foil, and it has many uses.”
Naturally, my curiosity was piqued (激发), and I eagerly asked, “What can it be used for?”
My dad smiled and said, “Why don’t you research it yourself? It’ll be a great opportunity for you to learn something new.”
With a sense of excitement, I grabbed my phone and started researching on the Internet. I found out that it is a type of metal paper called aluminum foil, which is moisture-proof (防潮的). As I looked through the information, an idea popped into my head. What if I put some water in a small aluminum foil container and heated it in the microwave? Would the water boil?
Unable to resist the urge to experiment, I cut a piece of aluminum foil and folded it into a small square container. I added some water into the container and placed it in the microwave. With my eyes wide open, I anxiously watched the aluminum foil container, filled with anticipation. But before I could see any changes in the water, suddenly a burst of fire erupted from the microwave, surprising me. I quickly rushed to unplug the appliance and collapsed onto the floor, feeling a great fear.
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My dad, hearing the sound, hurried over and asked, “What happened?”
My dad’s comforting words sank in, and I made a promise to myself to become more careful in my life.
My dad, hearing the sound, hurried over and asked, “What happened?” I explained the situation, feeling embarrassed and frightened by the unexpected outcome. My dad comforted me and explained patiently, “Metal should never be put in the microwave. It can cause a fire hazard. Scientific experiments are serious and cannot be blindly conducted. Therefore, be rigorous in the way you do something and you’ll be closer to your goal,” I listened attentively to my dad’s words and felt a sense of relief knowing that no one was hurt.
My dad’s comforting words sank in, and I made a promise to myself to become more careful in my life. I understood that science experiments require precision and careful planning. From that day forward, I promised to change my impulsive behaviour and adopt a more thorough and informed approach. I would listen, observe, and research before taking action, It was a turning point in my approach towards learning, and I was grateful for the invaluable advice my dad had shared with me. From that day on, I became more cautious and well-informed.
"]]本文是一篇读后续写。属于完全开放性质类作文。文章以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在后院发现了一张闪闪发光的锡纸,问爸爸这张纸叫什么,爸爸告诉他这是铝箔,并鼓励他自己去研究。作者决定在微波炉中加热一块锡纸容器里的水,但结果却导致了火灾。爸爸安慰他并告诉他科学实验需要谨慎和计划,作者发誓以后会更加小心谨慎,并感激爸爸给予的宝贵建议。从那天起,作者变得更加谨慎和知情,并改变了他的学习方法。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 “爸爸听到声音,急忙跑过去问:‘发生什么事了?’” 可知,第一段可描写作者解释事情发生的经过。
②由第二段首句内容 “爸爸安慰我的话我听进去了,我向自己保证在生活中要更加小心。” 可知,第二段可描写作者明白科学实验需要精确和仔细的计划,改变了以前的冲动行为。
2. 续写线索:爸爸跑过去询问——作者解释了事情原因——爸爸教育作者——作者明白了科学实验需要严谨——感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①进行,实施:conducted / carried out
②明白:understood / realized
③导致:cause / lead to
情绪类
①尴尬的:embarrassed / awkward
②感激的:grateful / thankful
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “I explained the situation, feeling embarrassed and frightened by the unexpected outcome.” (运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。)
(高分句型2) “I understood that science experiments require precision and careful planning.” (运用了连接代词that引导的宾语从句。)
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