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“Look, Tomiko!” Dandelion Pinkley said to her best friend. She held up a beautifully carved Viking (海盗) ship in the coolest toy store in town. “It’s the perfect gift for Doodlebug!” But it wasn’t just a ship. It was actually a cleverly designed display case (盒子) for an action figure. “He’d love that,” Tomiko agreed.
“He could totally show off his Sweyn Forkbeard Viking figures in this,” Dandelion said.
“Yeah,” Tomiko said.
“We’re doing our family gift exchange tonight,” she said. “Too bad I’ve only got one dollar and eighty-seven cents left.” She sighed (叹息).
Dandelion looked out of the window. Suddenly she turned, her face brightening.
“Tomiko!” she said excitedly. “I know how I can get the money!”
When she explained her idea, Tomiko’s eyes widened. “You’d really do that, Dandelion?” she asked. “Sure,” she replied. “But I have to hurry. See you tomorrow.”
“Good luck!” Tomiko waved as they said goodbye to each other.
Dandelion hesitated outside the shop. The sign above the window said “Mademoiselle” in beautiful lettering. Underneath, it read “Everything for the hair.” A long wig (假发) in the shop window was adorned (装饰) with beautiful feather hairclips (发夹) labeled “Mademoiselle’s Finest.” Dandelion sighed. She’d wanted one of those clips for ages. Shrugging (耸肩), she pulled the door open and went inside.
The shopkeeper almost laughed when Dandelion took off her hat and made her request. But she finally said, “I’ll take your hair. But I won’t pay a cent more than nine dollars for it.”
“Done!” Dandelion replied, shaking Mademoiselle’s hand.
Minutes later Mademoiselle lowered her scissors. “Now even Doodlebug had more hair than me.” Dandelion thought to herself.
With no time to spare, Dandelion rushed to the toy store and bought the Viking ship for ten dollars. Then, Dandelion skipped home happily. She couldn’t wait to see the look on Doodlebug’s face when he opened her gift.
That night, Doodlebug cried when Dandelion appeared. “Whoa! What did you do to your hair?!” Dandelion smiled bravely but said nothing.
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Doodlebug handed her the present he’d gotten her, and she eagerly opened it.
“Thanks, Dandelion,” Doodlebug said. “But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips instead—at least for now.”
参考范文:
Doodlebug handed her the present he’d gotten her and she eagerly opened it. A little cry of joy burst from her lips, followed immediately by a huge sigh. Inside the gift box was “Mademoiselle’s Finest” the most awesome set of feather hair clips she’d ever seen. But now her hair was too short to wear any of them. “Oh well, it’ll grow back,” she said, trying to be light-hearted. “Now you open mine. Doodlebug!” Doodlebug unwrapped the display case excitedly. Then he shook his head and laughed crazily. “It’s for Forkbeard!” Dandelion explained.
“Thanks, Dandelion,” Doodlebug said. “But I think we should use it to show off your hair clips.” “That’s crazy!” Dandelion replied. “What about Forkbeard?” “I sold him,” he said, “so I could buy you those feathery hair things.” “What?!” Dandelion cried. Then she started laughing, too. The next morning the Viking ship display case sat in full, feathered glory in the living room window. And there it would stay, deeply puzzling every passer-by, until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house and Dandelion’s hair grew back.
"]]本文以人物为线索,讲述了Dandelion想要送给她的好朋友一个礼物,但是她没有足够的钱去买礼物。虽然不舍,Dandelion Pinkley决定卖掉她的头发去凑钱给朋友买礼物。凑够钱后,她兴奋的买来了她选中的礼物,送到朋友家里。Dandelion的朋友Doodlebug看到她的头发后感到非常的吃惊。
(详解)
1. 段落续写
①由第一段的段首句 “Doodlebug把他给她的礼物递给了她,她急切地打开了礼物。” 可知,第一段可描写Doodlebug给Dandelion买了发卡作为礼物,以及Dandelion拿到礼物后的反应
②由第二段的段首句 “‘谢谢,Dandelion,’ Doodlebug说。‘但我认为我们应该用它来炫耀你的发夹——至少现在是这样。’” 可知,第二段可描写他们如何处理彼此的礼物。
2. 续写线索:买礼物——没钱——卖头发——送礼物——得到礼物发卡——如何处理礼物
3. 词汇激活:
行为类
①打开:unwrap / unpack
②炫耀:show off / display proudly
③返回:return to / go back to
情绪类
①兴奋地:excitedly / with excitement
②轻松愉快的:light-hearted / carefree
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “Inside the gift box was ‘Mademoiselle’s Finest’ the most awesome set of feather hair clips she’d ever seen.” (运用了完全倒装。)
(高分句型2) “And there it would stay, deeply puzzling every passer-by, until Forkbeard the Viking returned to the Pinkley house and Dandelion’s hair grew back.” (运用了until引导的时间状语从句。)
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