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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldn’t help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not even possible for her, since she had nothing with her. She stood beside a stand (货摊) for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave.
The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked, “Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”
“Oh, yes ... but I don’t have money on me ...” she replied.
“That’s nothing. I’ll treat you today,” said the man, “come in.”
The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.
“What is it?” asked the man kindly.
“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!” said Jenny as she wiped her tears, “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother, drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!”
Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?”
Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered mother’s familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel indebted, but I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.”
On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back.
参考范文:
Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath. When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house. “Where could my mother be?” she wondered, “Was she still angry with me?” Again, the scene of the quarrel appeared in her mind. She remembered her rudeness to her mother. Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.
A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back. She raised her head and saw the familiar face of her mother. “Here you come! I’ve been looking for you,” she said, tired and relieved. Jenny couldn’t help throwing herself into her mother’s arms. “Mum, I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude. Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.
"]]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Jenny与母亲吵架而离家出走,在感到饥饿而没钱吃饭的时候,一个商贩给了她一碗面条,Jenny非常感动,觉得自己母亲非常的无情不关心她,而商贩的话让Jenny觉得自己对母亲太粗鲁了,于是下定决心回家向母亲道歉的故事。
(详解)
1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容 “快到门口时,Jenny深吸了一口气。” 可知,第一段可描写Jenny回家后的心理活动。
②由第二段首句内容 “她的头发被轻轻地碰了一下,她的思绪又回来了。” 可知,第二段可描写Jenny给妈妈道歉,母女俩和好的过程。
2. 续写线索:感到疲惫和伤心——想起争吵的场景——意识到妈妈在乎自己——感到惭愧——看见妈妈——扑进妈妈怀里——道歉和感谢——妈妈原谅Jenny
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①出现在脑海:appeared in her mind / come to one’s mind / cross one’s mind
②流下:roll down / stream down
③表达:express / convey
情绪类
①难过的:sad / upset
②感激:gratitude / appreciation
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “Tired and sad, she sat down in front of the house.” (运用了形容词短语作状语。)
(高分句型2) “Realizing that all the scolding from her mother was due to the fact that her mother really cared a lot about her, she felt rather ashamed, and tears began to roll down her cheeks.” (运用了现在分词短语作状语、宾语从句和同位语从句。)
(高分句型3) “Mum, I’m so sorry and thank you for all you have done for me.” (运用了省略关系代词的定语从句。)
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