假定你是高一新生李华，上周参加了学校举行的迎新生开学典礼 (opening ceremony for freshmen)。请你给初中英语老师写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：

1. 你最感动的环节；

2. 你的感想。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. / Ms. ...,

Yours,

Li Hua

参考范文：

Dear Mr. / Ms. ...,

As one of your previous students, I am pleased to share my recent experience at the opening ceremony for freshmen with you.

It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown. The headmaster delivered a speech using several previous students who had overcome obstacles to achieve their dreams as examples, which moved me most. It inspired me to set high goals for myself and to work hard to achieve them. I feel motivated to embrace this new chapter in my life. I’m incredibly grateful for your continuous encouragement and I will do my best to make you proud.

Yours,

Li Hua

本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给初中英语老师写一封邮件，分享学校举行的迎新生开学典礼的经历。

(详解)

1. 词汇积累

高兴的：pleased → delighted

难以置信的：incredible → unbelievable

充满：be filled with → be full of

克服：overcome → get over

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.

拓展句：It was an incredible ceremony, which was filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “The headmaster delivered a speech using several previous students who had overcome obstacles to achieve their dreams as examples, which moved me most.” (运用了who引导限制性定语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。)

(高分句型2) “It was an incredible ceremony filled with a passion for exploring the unknown.” (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语。)