假设你是明启中学的高三学生王磊，你在社区公告栏看到一则消息，社区正在征集关于 “如何丰富老年人退休生活” 的意见。请你给社区负责人写一封信，内容包括：

1. 对社区如何丰富老年人退休生活提出建议；

2. 提出这些建议的理由。

参考范文：

Dear Community Manager,

My name is Wang Lei, a senior student from Mingqi High School. After reading the notice about improving retirees’ lives, I’d like to share some suggestions.

Firstly, organizing hobby classes (e.g., painting, gardening) could help seniors learn new skills, which keeps their minds active and fosters social connections. Secondly, regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi would enhance physical well-being and prevent diseases. Additionally, creating volunteer opportunities, such as mentoring children, allows retirees to share their experience, boosting their sense of purpose.

These activities address both mental and physical needs while combating loneliness. Seniors deserve fulfilling lives, and community support plays a vital role.

Thank you for considering my ideas.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Lei

本篇是应用文写作。你在社区公告栏看到一则消息，社区正在征集关于 “如何丰富老年人退休生活” 的意见，要求考生给社区负责人写一封信提出建议并给出理由。

(详解)

1. 词汇积累

建议：suggestion → advice

首先：firstly → to begin with

保持：keep → stay

提高：enhance → promote

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Secondly, regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi would enhance physical well-being and prevent diseases.

拓展句：Secondly, if we were to organize regular health workshops or exercise sessions like Tai Chi, it would enhance seniors’ physical well-being and help prevent diseases.

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “Firstly, organizing hobby classes (e.g., painting, gardening) could help seniors learn new skills, which keeps their minds active and fosters social connections.” (which引导的非限制性定语从句。)

(高分句型2) “Additionally, creating volunteer opportunities, such as mentoring children, allows retirees to share their experience, boosting their sense of purpose.” (动名词作主语。)