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Jim stared at the ground and sighed in disappointment. Players from the opposing team raced past Jim, celebrating their shocking victory. They’d scored the game-winning goal just seconds before the end of the game.
“Just one word to describe a loss like that,” Jim mumbled to his teammate Devin.
“Terrible!” Devin sighed. “It was a tough one.” He trotted (小步快跑) toward the middle of the field to shake hands with the winning team. Jim walked slowly behind Devin. He unhappily slapped hands with the winners, and then stopped to shut his eyes as the autumn air cooled his sweaty face.
“Terrible,” he repeated to himself as he sat on the bench and pulled his jacket on. “Let’s get some hot chocolate and watch the next game,” Devin said. There were eight teams in the YMCA league, so games would go on all morning. “Sorry. I’m heading home,” Jim said, “I’ve had enough soccer for today.”
As he reached the gate, Jim glanced back to see the next two teams take the field. They were jumping and shouting, excited to play. “That was us a little while ago, before we were discouraged.” Jim thought.
So why we lost the game at last? Jim asked himself. How did such a well-played game end up with such a terrible result? It was still clear in his head: Jim had the ball deep on the Jets’ side of the field, looking for Devin or another teammate to pass to. His team had outplayed the Jets for most of the game, but failed within the last seconds.
Jim let out a deep breath. The morning was growing warmer. Perfect for soccer. Jim looked back toward the field. He couldn’t see it, but he could hear the excited voices as the game continued.
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With a car’s horn beeping, Jim’s friends Tara and Bryan jumped out of the car.
There came the turn for Tara and Bryan’s team to play the game.
参考范文:
With a car’s horn beeping, Jim’s friends Tara and Bryan jumped out of the car. “How did you do?” Tara asked eagerly. “Terrible!” Jim replied in a down tone, still trying to figure out how the opposing team scored the game—winning goal just seconds before the end of the game. Bryan patted Jim’s shoulder asking, “Is winning the game the only reason why you play soccer and what really matters when playing a game?” Hearing this, Jim didn’t want to go home but decided to follow his friends and watch their game.
There came the turn for Tara and Bryan’s team to play the game. Jim watched with full attention as Tara’s team played fiercely against their opposing team. What impressed him most was that all the players in Tara’s team cooperated perfectly with unwavering resolve on their faces. Even when they were in a tie with the opponent, they stayed positive and confident. It dawned on Jim that success doesn’t always depend on the end result, but rather on how we face adversity and grow from it.
"]]本文以事件为线索展开,讲述了Jim所在的足球队在比赛中不幸落败,他非常沮丧,觉得很失败。队友Devin邀请他留下来一起看下一场足球比赛,Jim心情低落,于是拒绝了。在离开球场的过程中,Jim一直在思考为什么会输掉比赛,回想当时球场上的情况。回头看球场的时候,他无法看到现在场上的情况,只能听到兴奋的声音。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 “汽车喇叭声一响,Jim的朋友Tara和Bryan从车里跳了出来” 可知,第一段可描写两人和Jim交流之前比赛的情况,以及让Jim留下来继续看比赛。
②由第二段首句内容 “轮到Tara和Bryan的队伍上场了” 可知,第二段可描写Jim看到的Tara和Bryan的队伍在比赛中的精彩表现,以及Jim领悟到的关于成功和失败的道理。
2. 续写线索:Tara和Bryan出现——三人交流比赛情况——Jim决定留下看比赛——Tara和Bryan的队伍上场——Jim看比赛——Jim领悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①回复:reply / respond / answer
②弄清楚:figure out / work out / find out
③重要:matter / count / weigh
④合作:cooperate / work jointly / collaborate
⑤取决于:depend on / be determined by / be dependent on
情绪类
①急切地:eagerly / anxiously
②低落的:down / discouraged / downhearted
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “Is winning the game the only reason why you play soccer and what really matters when playing a game?” (动名词短语winning ... 作主语、why引导限制性定语从句、what引导表语从句。)
(高分句型2) “What impressed him most was that all the players in Tara’s team cooperated perfectly with unwavering resolve on their faces.” (what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句。)
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