你是明启中学的高三学生李明，你学校的校报专栏 “Pictures talk” 提供了两幅图片，并向广大师生征文。你有感而发，想向该专栏投稿。你的文章必须包含：

1. 对图片的简要描述；

2. 你的看法。

参考范文：

In the first picture, a young man tries repeatedly to shoot arrows at a target but fails to hit the center. He looks frustrated and wonders whether all his efforts mean failure. In the second picture, the man gives up and throws his bow and arrows into a trash can, leaving the target behind.

From my perspective, these two pictures show that failure is part of the process towards success. The man who keeps trying may feel disappointed, but this is how one learns and grows. If we give up too soon, we will never know how close we might have been to our goals. Therefore, it is essential to learn from mistakes and keep making progress. As long as we persevere, every “failure” becomes a valuable lesson leading us closer to success in the end.

本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生需在学校的校报专栏 “Pictures talk” 提供了两幅图片，并向广大师生征文。你有感而发，想向该专栏投稿。

(详解)

1. 词汇积累

沮丧的：frustrated → disappointed

放弃：give up → abandon

目标：goal → target

重要的：essential → important

2. 句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Therefore, it is essential to learn from mistakes and keep making progress.

拓展句：Therefore, it is essential that we should learn from mistakes and keep making progress..

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “He looks frustrated and wonders whether all his efforts mean failure.” (运用了whether引导的宾语从句。)

(高分句型2) “As long as we persevere, every ‘failure’ becomes a valuable lesson leading us closer to success in the end.” (运用了as long as引导的条件状语从句。)