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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Lily was dressed and ready for her first performance. The hall was crowded with parents and grandparents to see the students’ dance. It was a tradition for the school every year and Lily was going to dance in front of everyone. It scared her.
Yesterday she practiced her dance on the stage and everything went on smoothly. With only several moms watching, it wasn’t too bad. But it was different tonight. All the seats would be full and she felt nervous and terrified.
“Don’t worry. When you go out on the stage, you just look right where I was siting yesterday I will still be there. You just look at me and it will be just like yesterday!” Mom encouraged Lily.
What I should focus on is every movement in the dance. Just get lost in my dance and bring out the best, Lily told herself.
When she came back sage, she took a quick look from behind the curtain (幕). Butterflies were flying inside her stomach and she just wondered whether Mom would be there.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为80左右;
2. 续写部分的开头已为你写好。
The music began to play.
参考范文:
The music began to play. Taking a deep breath, she walked onto the stage. All she could see was a vast sea of unfamiliar faces. Suddenly, her gaze was drawn towards a bright and familiar face in the corner of the room. It was her mother, with a loving and encouraging smile. All the fear and nervousness drained away like water. She felt instantly more confident and ready to show her best.
As the music went on, Lily felt like she was flying on the stage, so absorbed in her performance. She performed so great that at the end of the performance, the audience gave a loud cheer, bringing Lily back to her senses. The whole hall was filled with applause and excitement as Lily took her bow, arms wide open and with a relieved and satisfied smile that she had done her best. She was now looking forward to getting reunited with her mother.
"]]本文以事件发展为线索展开,讲述了Lily为每年一次的舞台表演做了充分准备,但是临上台前感到紧张的故事。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
由首句内容 “音乐开始响起。” 可知,本段可描写Lily上台后感到很紧张,但是当她看到妈妈的笑脸的时候镇静下来,她认真地做着每一个动作,整场表演非常成功,以至于全场为她欢呼。
2. 续写线索:深吸气上台——紧张——看见妈妈——镇静下来——专注表演——表演成功——观众欢呼——期待见到妈妈。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①走上……:walked onto / stepped onto
②展示:show / present
情绪类
①表示爱意的:loving / affectionate
②自信的:confident / self-assured
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “Taking a deep breath, she walked onto the stage.” (运用了现在分词短语作状语。)
(高分句型2) “All she could see was a vast sea of unfamiliar faces.” (运用了省略了引导词的定语从句。)
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