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I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers—very big, tough-looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men—all wearing insignia (徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club—standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
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I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
参考范文:
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. They were chatting loudly and seemed to fill every corner of the place. My heart sank even further. I quickly found an empty seat in the back row, trying to make myself as inconspicuous as possible. I clutched my bag tightly, constantly glancing around, praying that nothing bad would happen. Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here. Were they going to cause trouble? The tension in the air was palpable, and I regretted my decision to come alone.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They had come to support the fundraiser for the local animal shelters. As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears. They were as moved as I was by the heartwarming and heartbreaking stories. During the intermission, some of them even came over to me, smiling kindly and asking if I was enjoying the film. Their tough exteriors hid big, soft hearts. I felt ashamed of my initial fear and was truly grateful that I had decided to come. We spent the rest of the evening sharing our love for animals and discussing ways to help.
"]]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者在费城参加会议期间,看到酒店附近剧院有一场关于动物救助站救助流浪狗的纪录片放映及筹款活动,作者因喜爱动物想去参加,却在剧院外看到一群看起来凶巴巴的摩托骑手,犹豫后还是进入剧院,希望电影结束时骑手们已离开。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句 “我匆匆走进剧院,却发现里面有更多的骑手。” 可知,第一段可描写作者进入剧院后,面对更多骑手时内心的忐忑、不安,以及所采取的试图让自己安全、不引人注意的行动,比如找角落座位、紧紧抓包、频繁观察骑手等,展现当时紧张氛围。
②由第二段首句 “电影开始时,我意识到这些骑手是一个动物救援组织。” 可知,第二段可描写电影播放过程中作者看到骑手们被纪录片触动的表现,以及中场休息时骑手们与作者友好互动的情景,体现出骑手们外表与内心的反差,突显温暖主题。
2. 续写线索:进入剧院,遇到更多骑手——内心恐惧找座躲避——电影开场,知晓骑手身份——观影中骑手真情流露——中场休息友好交流
3. 词汇激活:
行为类:
①紧握:clutch / grab / grasp / seize
②偷看:peek at / steal a look at / glance at
③支持:support / back / uphold / advocate
情绪类:
①感动:moved / touched / affected
②羞愧:ashamed / embarrassed
(点晴)
(高分句型1) “Every now and then, I peeked at the bikers, wondering what they were doing here.” (运用了现在分词短语作状语和what引导的宾语从句。)
(高分句型2) “As the documentary unfolded, showing the plight of the abandoned dogs, I saw many of the bikers wiping away tears.” (运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语和宾语补足语。)
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