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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar (捷豹), whose side door was dented (凹陷的). The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message: Don’t go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!

The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street on his way to work, going a bit too fast in his new Jaguar. He noticed kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jaguar’s side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jaguar backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, seized the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you?”

The young boy apologized. “Please sir ... please, I’m sorry ... I didn’t know what else to do,” he begged.

“I threw the brick because no one else would stop ...” With tears rolling down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.

“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can’t lift him up,” he said.

Still crying, the boy asked the angry manager, “Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair? He’s hurt and he’s too heavy for me.”

After hearing his words, the manager hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled (丧失能力的) must be taken to the hospital at once. But before that, he had to do something to stop the bleeding.

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Suddenly, he remembered that he always kept a first-aid kit in the car.

 

 

Twenty minutes later, they arrived at the nearest hospital.

 

 

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参考范文:

Suddenly, he remembered that he always kept a first-aid kit in the car. Luckily, it was there. Without hesitation, the manager took out a bandage from the kit and wrapped it lightly around the wound. Then, he carefully moved the wounded into the back seat of the car. Meanwhile, the younger brother put the wheelchair into the trunk and sat aside looking after his brother. Hardly had the two brothers settled down when the manager drove toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted them.

Twenty minutes later, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair, seated the disabled in it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. It was when the doctor declared the disabled was out of danger that they breathed a sigh of relief. At that time, the two boys’ parents arrived and expressed their heartfelt gratitude. Finally the manager drove his car to work, with the side door still dented and an old saying coming to his mind: “Roses given, fragrance in hand.”

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本文以砖块为线索展开,讲述了年轻的经理开着新车的时候,车突然被砖块砸出凹陷。原来是一个男孩为了找人帮助自己残疾的哥哥,故意扔砖块引起他的注意向他寻求帮助的故事。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容 “突然,他想起自己总是在车里放一个急救箱。” 可知,第一段可描写年轻的经理想帮助小男孩,将他的哥哥抱到自己的车上,并为他处理伤口并让弟弟给家人打电话的经过及相关细节。

②由第二段首句内容 “20分钟后,他们到达了最近的医院。” 可知,第二段可描写经理陪他们去医院看病的经过以及孩子的父母表示感谢的过程及相关细节。

2. 续写线索:续写线索:拿出急救箱——处理伤口——送到医院——陪同看病——收到感谢——继续上班

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①取出:take out / hand out / get out

②给:hand / give

情绪类

①感谢:showing his appreciation / show his gratitude / gave him heartfelt thanks.

②放松:take it easy / just relax

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “Hardly had the two brothers settled down when the manager drove toward the nearest hospital.” (运用了倒装句。)

(高分句型2) “It was when the doctor declared the disabled was out of danger that they breathed a sigh of relief.” (使用了强调句型,被强调的内容是when引导的时间状语从句。)

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