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I never knew how important life was until I almost lost my little brother. It all started when my brother got sick. I was nine, and he was just nine months. At that time, he kept touching his ear. The first doctor my mother took him to told her that it was an ear disease.
After a week, he was still touching his ear continually. My mother took him to a different doctor. The doctor ran blood tests on him and thought he should be in the hospital as soon as possible. At first, the doctors did not know what was wrong with him. A couple of days later, they found out he had a type of bone marrow (骨髓) cancer.
The doctors tried one round of treatment. It helped, but my brother lost his hair. Then he needed a bone marrow transplant (移植). They needed to find a bone marrow donor (捐赠者), so the doctors tested my family first.
I was so afraid to get a shot. My sisters and I were all crying. We got it over with quickly, and it did not hurt as much as I thought it would. A couple of weeks later, we found out that one of my sisters and I were both matches. My parents had to choose which one of us should be the donor. After thinking about it for a long time, they made their decision one Sunday.
That day, after having our lunch, my parents put me on the sofa. With tears filling their eyes, they told me that they wanted me to be the bone marrow donor because I was older. They asked me whether I’d like to be the donor. Hearing it, I was excited and nervous.
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I wondered whether to agree it or not.
About 45 days later, my brother’s health improved a lot.
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I wondered whether to agree it or not. Knowing I might save my brother’s life, I soon agreed. My brother was then moved to another hospital. About two weeks later, I went to the hospital to do the transplant. When I woke up after the transplant, I went to see my brother. He was asleep, and my father was holding him. All of the bone marrow that I had donated had gone into him. Everybody hoped that it would work.
About 45 days later, my brother’s health improved a lot. And soon he came out of hospital. He was doing fine. We prepared good meals for him daily. After he got much better, we encouraged him to do exercise for a while almost every day to help him build up his body. Now, many years have passed. He’s doing great! We feel happy and excited. This experience has shown me that we have to believe the best will happen. Also, be strong whatever happens.
"]]本文以救弟弟为线索展开,讲述了我的弟弟九个月时,被确诊患上了骨髓癌,他需要进行骨髓移植。为了找到骨髓捐献者,医生对我和家人进行了测试,我的一个妹妹和我都与弟弟的骨髓匹配。最终,父母希望我成为骨髓捐献者,因为我年纪比较大,他们问我是否愿意做捐赠者。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 “我想知道是否应该同意。” 可知,第一段可描写我是否为弟弟捐献了骨髓。
②由第二段首句内容 “大约45天后,我弟弟的健康状况有了很大改善。” 可知,第二段可描写弟弟的健康恢复情况及我的感悟。
2. 续写线索:决定捐献骨髓——进行手术——手术顺利——弟弟逐渐恢复健康——我的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①出院:come out of hospital / leave hospital
②相信:believe / trust
情绪类
①高兴的:happy / glad
②兴奋的:excited / thrilled
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “When I woke up after the transplant, I went to see my brother.” (由When引导的时间状语从句。)
(高分句型2) “After he got much better, we encouraged him to do exercise for a while almost every day to help him build up his body.” (由After引导的时间状语从句。)
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