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As the late afternoon sun beat down on his farm last May, Brandon Leseberg finished feeding his cows and decided to call it a day. As they often did, his two sons, Louie, 6, and Everett, 3 followed him. As they headed for the house, the two boys ran ahead of their father who stopped to close the gate. Louie stopped at a water tap (水龙头) above an old well. Unknown to the Lesebergs, the board covering the well had, over time, grown brittle (易碎的). When Louie stepped on it, it caved in.
Brandon had just finished locking the gate when he tuned around and saw only his youngest son. “Where’s Louie?” he shouted. “He fell in the hole!” Everett said. Brandkon, 37, quickly realized what had happened. He ran to the well and heard Louie struggling. Without hesitation, he jumped in.
As he fell some 70 feet down the well Brandon heard Louie screaming. Somehow Brandon managed to grab onto a pipe that ran down the side of the well. He hit the cold water at the bottom of the well. He popped his head out of the water and grabbed Louie, who was panicking and trying to stay afloat (漂浮的) in the water. Brandon raised his son onto his chest as he put his own legs and back against the narrow walls for support. “All right, Dad, you can pull us out now,” Louie said.
If only it were that easy. There was no way he could climb out. The pipe that he’d grabbed during his fall was too slippery (滑的) to be of any use. There was only one way out. Looking up to see Everett looking down at them from the top of the well, Brandon shouted, “Everett, you’re going to have to be a big boy and save us. Run to the road and stand by the mailbox until someone stops. Tell them we need help.”
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Everett did as he was told.
The neighbours now turned their attention to Brandon, but he was too heavy to pull out of the well using just the rope.
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Everett did as he was told. About 15minutes later, Dan and Christi, nearby farmers, were driving by when they noticed Everett alone by the side of the road, waving. They pulled over and asked if he was OK. “My daddy’s in a hole” he told them. Hearing this, they piled Everett into their pickup and then drove to the well. “Brandon” Dan shouted, “It’s Dan. We’re going to send a rope down to you.” After several minutes they pulled Louie out of the well.
The neighbours now turned their attention to Brandon, but he was too heavy to pull out of the well using just the rope. After a brief discussion, they decided to use the old windmill that still stood over the well. Forty-some minutes after he’d jumped into the well to save his son, Brandon emerged, cold and wet. “You are our life saver.” Brandon thanked Dan, who turned to Everett. Dan said. “Everett is actually your life saver. Without him, I wouldn’t have known the accident, let alone the rescue!” Words couldn’t express his surprise when the father turned to the 3-year-old boy. Finally they thanked Dan again together.
"]]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Brandon Leseberg喂完牛后,和两个儿子Louie和Everett一起回家,在Brandon停下来关门时,Louie踩在覆盖在井盖上的木板上,由于木板老化断裂,他掉进了井里。Brandon跳进井里抓住了Louie,但是因为水太深,两人都不能逃出,Brandon让井口的Everett去路边寻求帮助。
(详解)
1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容 “Everett照他说的做了。” 可知,第一段可描写Everett找到了人来帮忙以及前来帮忙的人所提供的帮助。
②由第二段首句内容 “邻居们现在把注意力转移到Brandon身上,但他太重了,光用绳子根本拉不出井来。” 可知,第二段可描写邻居们怎么救起Brandon和父子们的感谢。
2. 续写线索:Everett去求救——邻居停下车——了解了情况——开车到井边——拉出Louie——利用旧风车拉起Brandon——感激
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①停车:pull over / pull on the side
②拉出:pull out / haul out
③浮现:emerge / arise
情绪类
①感谢:thank / show one’s gratitude to
②惊讶:surprise / shock
(点睛)
(高分句型1) “After a brief discussion, they decided to use the old windmill that still stood over the well.” (由关系代词that引导的限制性定语从句。)
(高分句型2) “‘You are our life saver.’ Brandon thanked Dan, who turned to Everett.” (由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句。)
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