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At Valley High School in South Sacramento, California, on a Tuesday afternoon, two of Valley High School’s baseball teams were gathered on the school field preparing for a game to be held the next day. They were at their final practice of the season when they heard cries for help from their school’s parking lot.

Co-head coach Brett Sawyer was getting something from the locker room when he heard tires screeching (发出刺耳声), and a loud “bang”. He came out to see the entire team quickly rush to the parking lot, jumping over fences (围栏).

It turned out a 16-year-old student visiting Valley High School was accidentally hit by a car in the lot, and she was stuck under the vehicle. The car was driven by her own mother, who dropped her off in the parking lot and then hit another car. In a panic, the mother backed her vehicle up without realizing that her daughter was right behind the car, and the girl became trapped underneath.

It did not take long before around a dozen of the baseball players ran out there as a team. There was no one really saying much. The guys just got around the car and helped lift the four-door car off the girl, whose upper body was trapped under the back part of the car. The teams’ assistant coach James Millholland was then able to pull her to safety. “With all the team work we had going on, it didn’t feel heavy,” said player Sukhminder Gill. “It felt like we could pick anything up at that moment.”

Sawyer and Millholland weren’t able to get through to 911 on their cell phones, so they ran to their classrooms to call for help. Finally, medical care personnel arrived and transported the girl to a local hospital. Sawyer heard she was expected to recover, which was a great relief.

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Coach Sawyer pulled all the players aside.

 

 

This incident proved the win-loss record on Wednesday wasn’t all that important.

 

 

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Coach Sawyer pulled all the players aside. Sawyer said to them, “I just want to say how proud you all made me today. I know some of you are kind of shaken up by the whole accident. The girl is just a teenager, like all of you. But you all did what you had to do to save someone’s life.” Before their game the next day, team members received some snacks and a thank-you note from their president of the school board.

This incident proved the win-loss record on Wednesday wasn’t all that important. One Valley team won and the other lost, but Sawyer said to the players, “To be honest, we might not be the best baseball team around, but you sure are a great group of guys. You didn’t even discuss what to do. You just went out there and did it. You were all raised right. Although we lost, it was the best game of the year.” To these players, this accident was also a satisfying way to help finish their season.

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本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了一个周二的下午,在加州萨克拉门托南部的山谷高中,山谷高中的两支棒球队聚集在学校操场上,为第二天举行的比赛做准备。当他们听到从学校停车场传来的呼救声时,他们正在进行本赛季的最后一次训练。事故发生后,队员们自发参与到救援中,索耶教练为他们感到骄傲。

(详解)

1. 段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容 “索耶教练把所有的球员拉到一边。” 可知,第一段可描写索耶教练表达自己为队员感到骄傲以及队员们收到感谢信。

②由第二段首句内容 “这件事证明了周三的输赢记录并不是那么重要。” 可知,第二段可描写索耶教练对队员们的教导。

2. 续写线索:把球员拉到一边——表达骄傲之情——收到感谢信——比赛获胜——索耶教练教导

3. 词汇激活

行为类

①抚养:raise / bring up

②挽救:save / rescue

③完成:finish / complete

情绪类

①吓到:be shaken up / be frightened

②很棒:great / excellent

(点睛)

(高分句型1) “I know some of you are kind of shaken up by the whole accident.” (运用了省略that的宾语从句。)

(高分句型2) “Although we lost, it was the best game of the year.” (运用了although引导让步状语从句。)

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